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"Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion." In the recent times,man made object such as, computers, are being used by most frequently especially in the educational system.Few say,it impacts in a negative way and some debate that it leads children in a positive way. From my point, it has both advantages as well as dis advantages. Will be explaining in detail in the inline paragraphs. I will first commence with positive results.Having laptops in schools and home will benifit kids, as, they will get more chance to learn most on a subject. For instance, rather than knowing about a topic or a subject just by reading academic books will get to know 60 to 70% of knowledge. If they google the same in computers they will know 90-95% of the subject because on youtubes they will provide additional information

"Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. " In the recent times, man made object such as, computers, are being used by most frequently especially in the educational system. Few say, it impacts in a negative way and some debate that it leads children in a positive way. From my point, it has both advantages as well as dis advantages. Will be explaining in detail in the inline paragraphs. I will first commence with positive results. Having laptops in schools and home will benifit kids, as, they will get more chance to learn most on a subject. For instance, rather than knowing about a topic or a subject just by reading academic books will get to know 60 to 70% of knowledge. If they google the same in computers they will know 90-95% of the subject because on youtubes they will provide additional information qV62w

"Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion. " In the recent times, man made object such as, computers, are being used by most frequently especially in the educational system. Few say, it impacts in a negative way and some debate that it leads children in a positive way. From my point, it has both advantages as well as dis advantages. Will be explaining in detail in the inline paragraphs. I will first commence with positive results. Having laptops in schools and home will benifit kids, as, they will get more chance to learn most on a subject. For instance, rather than knowing about a topic or a subject just by reading academic books will get to know 60 to 70% of knowledge. If they google the same in computers they will know 90-95% of the subject because on youtubes they will provide additional information. In Addition to it, we have built in applications called powerpoint, excel and microsoft word on computers, where kids and adolecents get some time to spend on paints and practice on keyboard using microsoft word at an young age. On the other side, the negative impacts are, as there is no ristriction for the use of laptops, few take advantage in utilizing them to the fullest in a bad way. For example, adolescents open some vulnerable websites such as pon sites, which influences them with negative taughts. Also, there are many hyber security issues like, hacking accounts, which leads to exposure of sensitive information. To conclude, I always recommend parents to have a keen observation on what they children do then they switch on their laptops. Using system is benificial for children if they utilize them in an effective way, which in turn results with good knowledge

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