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Computers are an essential feature of modern education. Some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. Others, however, think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. v.6

Computers are an essential feature of modern education. Some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. Others, however, think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate. v. 6
Technological devices are getting even more popular as students often use them as an effective and accessible learning tool. And, even though some claims this type of preferences are not suitable for teaching purposes, I firmly believe e-learning is a pathway to transform the education system around the world. Let's tear down this matter. Firstly, there are native users with an IT-mindset incorporated whom usually seeks to execute all their needs throughout the internet. Studies are not an exception. For instance, a survey conducted by HAYS among these learners, shown that 89% of the interviewees acknowledge that by learning in front of a PC could increase their productivity since they effectively retain more information. As this, it is clear that access information appetite as well as preferences are rising instead of decreasing. Nevertheless, older generations, rather to stick with an old-fashion way to learn. Not only because they do not feel comfortable with a computer, but also due to a lack of empowerment by using one. Thus, the main point is that it takes even more time to get along with an operating system, for example: a mouse or a keyboard, which end up in losing time and make the task terribly complicated for them. Moreover, the complexity of todays technology represents a challenge that creates a gap of which no all are capable of understand to keep up the pace with it. In my opinion and to conclude, computers have become an extraordinary gate to knowledge, information and accessibility. Undoubtedly, this sort of mechanism advocates for academic needs and equip the students with a powerful instrument in their path of learning. In addition, a fully and connected world has brought and strengthened a whole new way of transferring academic knowledge.
Technological devices are getting even more popular as students
often
use
them as an effective and accessible learning tool. And,
even though
some
claims this type of preferences are not suitable for teaching purposes, I
firmly
believe e-learning is a pathway to transform the education system around the world.

Let
's tear down this matter.
Firstly
, there are native users with an IT-mindset incorporated whom
usually
seeks to execute all their needs throughout the internet. Studies are not an exception.
For instance
, a survey conducted by HAYS among these learners, shown that 89% of the interviewees acknowledge that by learning in front of a PC could increase their productivity since they
effectively
retain more information. As this, it is
clear
that access information appetite
as well
as preferences are rising
instead
of decreasing.

Nevertheless
, older generations,
rather
to stick with an
old
-fashion way to learn. Not
only
because
they do not feel comfortable with a computer,
but
also
due to a lack of empowerment by using one.
Thus
, the main point is that it takes even more time to
get
along with an operating system,
for example
: a mouse or a keyboard, which
end
up in losing time and
make
the task
terribly
complicated for them.
Moreover
, the complexity of
todays
technology represents a challenge that creates a gap of which no all are capable of understand to
keep
up the pace with it.

In my opinion and
to conclude
, computers have become an extraordinary gate to knowledge, information and accessibility.
Undoubtedly
, this sort of mechanism advocates for academic needs and equip the students with a powerful instrument in their path of learning.
In addition
, a
fully
and connected world has brought and strengthened a whole new way of transferring academic knowledge.
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IELTS essay Computers are an essential feature of modern education. Some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. Others, however, think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate. v. 6

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291 words
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