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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. RNk98
Some people around the world believes to land a dream job is only after finishing their studies from an educational institute. Although, there are opponents who thinks it is more imperative to gain soft skills and on-job experience. I strongly concur with the notion of going to college and then find the aspiring job. I will elucidate on both conviction with an adequate examples. Some people around the world believes to land a dream job is only after finishing their studies from an educational institute. Although, there are opponents who thinks it is more imperative to gain soft skills and on-job experience. I strongly concur with the notion of going to college and then find the aspiring job. I will elucidate on both conviction with an adequate examples. Some people around the world believes to land a dream job is only after finishing their studies from an educational institute. Although, there are opponents who thinks it is more imperative to gain soft skills and on-job experience. I strongly concur with the notion of going to college and then find the aspiring job. I will elucidate on both conviction with an adequate examples.
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thinks
it is more imperative to gain soft
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skills
and on-job experience. I
strongly
concur with the notion of going to college and then find the aspiring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
. I will elucidate on both conviction with an adequate
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examples
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This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around the world believes to land a dream
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
after finishing their studies from an educational institute. Although, there are opponents who
Did you mean "think"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'opponents' should be used.
thinks
it is more imperative to gain soft
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and on-job experience. I
strongly
concur with the notion of going to college and then find the aspiring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
. I will elucidate on both conviction with an adequate
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "example"?
examples
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around the world believes to land a dream
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
after finishing their studies from an educational institute. Although, there are opponents who
Did you mean "think"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'opponents' should be used.
thinks
it is more imperative to gain soft
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and on-job experience. I
strongly
concur with the notion of going to college and then find the aspiring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
. I will elucidate on both conviction with an adequate
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "example"?
examples
.
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IELTS essay Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.

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