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Compare large families, vs small ones.

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The family is the main part of a person's development. Families are divided into two types, large and small. Children of large families have a more chance to learn cooperation at an early age than children of smaller families. They must learn to get along with siblings. In another analysis, small families can better look after their children's education, facilities, and entertainment as compared to big ones. They get the best education and go to the best schools. Ultimately, a big or small family is the most important thing in a person's life and both sizes, have their advantages and disadvantages.
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is the main part of a person's development.
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are divided
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Children of large
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have a more chance to learn cooperation at an early age than children of smaller
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families
. They
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learn to
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along with siblings. In another analysis,
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small
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families
can better look after their children's education, facilities, and entertainment as compared to
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big
ones. They
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get
the best education and go to the best schools.
Ultimately
, a
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or
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family
is the most
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thing in a person's life and both sizes, have their advantages and disadvantages.
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IELTS essay Compare large families, vs small ones.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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