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A man working on his laptop

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This is a picture of a man typing on his laptop and staring at his credit card. He is holding a credit card in his left hand while he is typing with his right hand. It seems that he is looking at the number of his credit card to shopping online. I would like to add that he is a middle-aged adult and probably an executive worker because he is wearing a gorgeous white shirt. The best way to prevent and slow down transmission is to be well informed about the COVID-19 virus, the disease it causes and how it spreads. Protect yourself and others from infection by washing your hands or using an alcohol based rub frequently and not touching your face.
This is a picture of a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
typing on his laptop and staring at his credit card. He is holding a credit card in his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
hand while he is typing with his right hand. It seems that he is looking at the number of his credit card to shopping online. I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
that he is a middle-aged adult and
probably
an executive worker
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because
he is wearing a gorgeous white shirt.

The best way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
and slow down transmission is to be
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well informed
about the COVID-19 virus, the disease it causes and how it spreads. Protect yourself
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
from infection by washing your hands or using an alcohol based rub
frequently
and not touching your face.
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IELTS essay A man working on his laptop

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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