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Choose a present for my friend on the birthday

Choose a present for my friend on the birthday NMEM0

personally, I would choose a book. I will mention my reasons. First of all, it's cheaper than a trip ticket. in fact, the cost of the journey is approximately 4 to 5 million including place, food, and numerous services if my friend would like to enjoy all the time. Meanwhile, a book that has excited content is just about 300-500. Moreover, almost all places are freezer because corona-virus are exploding so it's extremely dangerous to choose a trip ticket as a present for my friend

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPersonally
personally
, I would choose a book. I will mention my reasons. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, it's cheaper than a trip ticket. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 fact, the cost of the journey is approximately 4 to 5 million including place, food, and numerous services if my friend would like to enjoy all the time. Meanwhile, a book that has excited content is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 about 300-500. Moreover
, almost all places are freezer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.coronavirus
corona-virus
 are exploding This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it's extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 to choose a trip ticket as a present for my friend