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Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks.why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences?

Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences? kYeAR

There is no denying the fact that, children in many nations are taking more junk food because fast food is easily available as well as due to their busy schedule. There are lot of effect when youngsters are eating fast food To begin, the children are eating more junk food due to lot of reasons, firstly, their parents are busy in work they can not spend time with children and parents do not make food at home that's why they are eating junk food because fastfood is easily available another reason children are watching television apart from that using smart phone they watch get influenced and place order according to their desire. In addition, if children eat unhealthy food they face lot of problems. Children always prefer fastfood they face many problems such as overweight.

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