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changing role of women in today's socielty

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THE ROLE OF WOMEN THEN AND NOW The role of women in society has changed throughout history. In the old days it was considered that women were the property of men, making them totally dependent on a man in order to survive. The Second World War produced a new industrial revolution in women. The workplace was occupied by women and due to these circumstances their new role in the factories was socially accepted. Next, women began to join university education and to participate with their work in several specific areas. In Europe and part of America, the feminist movement which fought for women´s equality and their liberation began and ideas such as the female vote and the entrance of women to education. The participation of women in economic life is a process of great personal and professional demand, because they have to deal with responsibility at home, children and a huge list of functions. At present, women have full importance, invade universities and take place with men in all areas of society, in positions of hierarchy, as well as in scientific research and medicine, the high political positions and in culture. In conclusion, equality between women and men have all the human rights and all conditions to get the development and reduction of poverty.
THE ROLE OF
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WOMEN
THEN AND
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The role of
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women
in society has
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changed
throughout history. In the
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old
days it
was considered
that
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women
were the property of
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men
, making them
totally
dependent on a
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man
in order to survive.

The Second World War produced a new industrial revolution in
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women
. The workplace
was occupied
by
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women
and due to these circumstances their new role in the factories was
socially
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accepted
.
Next
,
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women
began to
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join
university education and to participate with their work in several specific areas. In Europe and part of America, the feminist movement which fought for
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women´s
equality and their liberation began and
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ideas
such as the female vote and the entrance of
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women
to education.

The participation of
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women
in economic life is a process of great personal and professional demand,
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because
they
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have to
deal with responsibility at home, children and a huge list of functions.

At present,
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women
have full importance, invade universities and take place with
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men
in all areas of society, in positions of hierarchy,
as well
as in scientific research and medicine, the high political positions and in culture.

In conclusion
, equality between
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women
and
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men
have all the human rights and all conditions to
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get
the development and reduction of poverty.
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IELTS essay changing role of women in today's socielty

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
214 words
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