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CCTV cameras cons and pros

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Nowadays a lot of CCTV cameras have been placed in public places such as streets, shops, stations. . . etc. although it reduces a lot of crimes some people think it iss not necessary and they prefer to keep their privacy this essay includes both views in the argument with drawing a valid conclusion. One of the most advantages of CCTV cameras is to deter criminal activity in the past centuries you could had done a crime without hesitating meanwhile with the existence of cameras everywhere it definitely has been reducing the crime rates during the few last years. Another benefit to consider is providing safe like for instance if you’re feeling paranoid that someone chasing you or stalking you you’d feel safe if you saw cctv cameras on your way. On the other hand, some people think it violates our privacy and quoting around “those who would give up their essential liberty, to buy a little temporary safety, deserve neither liberty nor safety. ”

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