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Cars are the greatest danger to human life today. Give your opinion with reasons

In 21th century, automobiles making a huge damage on people`s daily lives. I agree with this statement, cars affects to human`s life conditions. First of all, automobile`s fuels are one of the reasons that cause global warming. Combusting of fuels in cars are forming greenhouse gases and CO2 emissions. As a result of increasing concentration of greenhouse gases in atmosphere, temperature on the Earth grow, ice melting, warming Ocean, sea level rising. Also, people around the world lose their homes, jobs, businesses, loss crops because of consequences of global warming. Secondly, as result of road accident, every year millions of people die. In many countries road traffic is undeveloped. For instance: dangerous or broken roads between cities and countries. Additionally, only 15% of all countries can provide citizens with safe road traffic. In conclusion, automobiles have a seriously effects on human`s life. People need to be careful with traffic roads.

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21th
 century, automobiles making Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply “huge damage”.huge damage
a huge damage
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people`s
 daily This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement, cars affects to The character between ‘human’ and ‘s’ is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use “human’s” (curly apostrophe) or “human’s” (straight apostrophe).human’shuman's
human`s
 life conditions.

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First of all
, The character between ‘automobile’ and ‘s’ is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use “automobile’s” (curly apostrophe) or “automobile’s” (straight apostrophe).automobile’sautomobile's
automobile`s
 fuels are one of the reasons that cause global warming. Combusting of fuels in cars are forming greenhouse gases and CO2 emissions. As a result
 of increasing concentration of greenhouse gases in atmosphere, temperature on the Earth grow, ice melting, warming Ocean, sea level rising. Also
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 around the world lose their homes, jobs, businesses, loss crops This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of consequences of global warming.

Secondly
, as result of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 accident, every year millions of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
. In This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 countries You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 traffic is undeveloped
. For instance
: This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 or broken You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 between cities and countries. Additionally
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 15% of all countries can provide citizens with safe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 traffic.

In conclusion
, automobiles have a seriously
 effects on The character between ‘human’ and ‘s’ is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use “human’s” (curly apostrophe) or “human’s” (straight apostrophe).human’shuman's
human`s
 life. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 need to be careful with traffic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
. 