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can you tell me about your family

can you tell me about your family wm05l
my name is alice. i am from india. my family have got 4 members include my dad, mom, older brother, younger brother and me. now my younger brother is 12 years old and now he is in grade 6 and he is good at math so he caculated very fast. my older brother name is ngoc. he has beautiful and girly name, he is 17 years old he is in class 8 at trang tien school. he is really like play sport. and always play with me after school at large plygorund for chidren. he is good at math and he is alway tstand for greathigh at class and has 1 gorgeous girlfriend
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my
name is
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alice
.
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i
am from
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india
.
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my
family have
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4 members include my dad, mom, older
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brother
, younger
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brother
and me.
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now
my younger
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brother
is 12 years
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old
and
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now
he is in grade
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6 and
he is
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good
at math
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so
he
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caculated
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very
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fast
.
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my
older
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brother
name is
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ngoc
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he
has
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beautiful
and
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name, he is 17 years
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he is in
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class
8 at
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trang
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tien
school.
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he
is
really
like play sport.
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and
always play with me after school at large
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plygorund
for
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chidren
.
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he
is
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good
at
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math and
he is
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alway
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tstand
for
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greathigh
at
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class
and has 1 gorgeous
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girlfriend
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IELTS essay can you tell me about your family

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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