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Both the reading and the speaker talk about the painting known as "Portrait of an Elderly woman in a white bonnet", which is paintated by rembrandt.

Both the reading and the speaker talk about the painting known as " Portrait of an Elderly woman in a white bonnet" , which is paintated by rembrandt. PVnog
Both the reading and the speaker talk about the painting known as " Portrait of an Elderly woman in a white bonnet" , which is paintated by rembrandt. The former was not agreed that this painting done by the rembrandt while the lateral provides several resons to supports that this done by rembrandt. To begin with, the reading states that the woman's dress in the portrit is inconsistent. The reading notes that woman is wearing white line cap which mostly servant were which is not the rembrandt style of paintaing. On the other hand, the speaker says that the x-rays and the analysis of the colour of the paintaing revels that this white line was added 100 years later to the original paintaing. He also mentions that this was done to increase the value of the paintaing. Moreover, the passage contends that painting light and shadow was the style of the rembrandt and this painting does not show that. However, the professor says that original painting was simple color cloth which reflect the light on the face, so this painting belongs to rembrandt. Furthermore, the article contends that painting was done on several pieces of wood which is glued together. Auther's opinion is that rembrandt only does paintaing on the single wood panel. Once again the speaker was not agree. He explains that original painting was done on the single wood only, later some one added small wood to look attractive. in addition, the examination of the wood revels that it was made from the tree which rembrandt mostly use for his painting.
Both the reading and the speaker talk about the
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painting
known as
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&quot
; Portrait of an Elderly woman in a white
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bonnet&quot
;
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,
which is
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paintated
by
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rembrandt
. The former was not
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agreed
that this
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painting
done by the
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rembrandt
while the lateral provides several
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resons
to supports that this done by
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rembrandt
.

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with, the reading states that the woman's dress in the
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portrit
is inconsistent. The reading notes that woman is wearing white line cap which
mostly
servant were which is not the
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rembrandt
style of
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paintaing
.
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, the speaker says that the x-rays and the analysis of the
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colour
of the
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paintaing
revels that this white line was
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added
100 years later to the original
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paintaing
. He
also
mentions that this
was done
to increase the value of the
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paintaing
.

Moreover
, the passage contends that
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painting
light and shadow was the style of the
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rembrandt
and this
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painting
does not
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show
that.
However
, the professor says that original
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painting
was simple color cloth which reflect the light on the face,
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so
this
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painting
belongs to
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rembrandt
.

Furthermore
, the article contends that
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painting
was done
on several pieces of
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wood
which
is glued
together.
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Auther
's opinion is that
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rembrandt
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only
does
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paintaing
on the single
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wood
panel.
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Once
again the speaker was not
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agree
. He
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explains
that original
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painting
was done
on the single
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wood
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only
, later
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some one
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added
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small
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wood
to look attractive.
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in
addition, the examination of the
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wood
revels that it
was made
from the tree which
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rembrandt
mostly
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use
for his
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painting
.

IELTS essay Both the reading and the speaker talk about the painting known as " Portrait of an Elderly woman in a white bonnet" , which is paintated by rembrandt.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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