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Both the reading and lecture are about the cane toads which harm small animals.

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Both the reading and lecture are about the cane toads which harm small animals. They were introduced to Australia to control the population’s harmful insects in 1935, but now, they, themselves, have become a problem. The reading provides three solutions for solving the mentioned trouble and then supports them. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article and finds all of arguments ineffective. First of all, the author of reading declares that constructing a national fence would be a good idea because it could already prevent from spread of rabbits in Australia. With this approach, the cane toads will not be able to move new areas. This point is challenged by the professor and she points out the young toads and their eggs find in the rivers and streams; hence, the water currents carry out them easily to other places. Secondly, the article contends that since the cane toads and their eggs would be gathered and destroyed by hand; therefore, the state should provide some programs to invite the young volunteers for doing this task; conversely, the lecturer claims that volunteers who do not have enough training, fail to discern the cane toads from native frogs because they are similar to each other particularly when the cane toads are young; consequently, the aforementioned suggestion may harm native Australian frogs. Finally, the reading passage states that researchers or scientists should create a disease- causing virus to prevent from reproducing cane toads. It has to be designed to infect just the cane toad population and no other reptiles or amphibians. This argument is rebutted by the professor. She poses that large number of Australian amphibians or insects are usually transported to other countries with the purpose of research or pet. When the infected insects or amphibians enter the United State, there is a possibility that virus may harm cane toads in The USA. Since the cane toad is a native species in this country; so a plentiful of cane toads will be infected.
Both the
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and lecture are about the
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which harm
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small
animals. They
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to Australia to control the population’s harmful insects in 1935,
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but
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now
, they, themselves, have become a problem. The
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provides three solutions for solving the mentioned trouble and then supports them. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article and finds
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ineffective.

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, the author of
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declares that constructing a national fence would be a
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good
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it could already
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prevent
from spread of rabbits in Australia. With this approach, the
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toads
will not be able to
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new areas. This point
is challenged
by the
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professor and
she points out the young
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toads
and their eggs find in the rivers and streams;
hence
, the water currents carry out them
easily
to
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places.

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, the article contends that since the
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and their eggs would
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and
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destroyed
by hand;
therefore
, the state should provide
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some
programs to invite the young volunteers for doing this task;
conversely
, the lecturer claims that volunteers who do not have
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training, fail to discern the
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cane
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toads
from native frogs
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because
they are similar to each
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particularly
when the
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are young;
consequently
, the aforementioned suggestion may harm native Australian frogs.

Finally
, the
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passage states that researchers or scientists should create a disease- causing virus to
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prevent
from reproducing
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cane
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. It
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the
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population and no
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other
reptiles or amphibians. This argument
is rebutted
by the professor. She poses that large number of Australian amphibians or insects are
usually
transported to
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other
countries with the purpose of research or pet. When the infected insects or amphibians enter the United State, there is a possibility that virus may harm
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cane
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toads
in The USA. Since the
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toad
is a native species in this country;
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so
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a plentiful of
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will
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.

IELTS essay Both the reading and lecture are about the cane toads which harm small animals.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
334 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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