Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.

It is often said that people who mostly spend their life at workplace and search about individual wellbeing, job satisfaction is the one of all important factor to influence it. This essay discusses about the factors contribute to job satisfaction and expectation of job satisfaction for all workers. Many jobseekers in all the world looking for the job what they want or they like. It can be said if the job or work for their, sometimes can be a reason why job satisfaction can arise on workers life. Secondly, about salary. Many people in the world who works as an employee almost have reason why they always looking for job in big company, the main reason is the big company always offer a good salary for new employee, because many people think if they have a good salary, they can reach an individual wellbeing. However, sometimes it depends on the company or the place they look for job. To reach an expectation of job satisfaction, many workers works too much even though the job what they do as job as desired. For example, workers always late to go home because they had an extra job in the workplace or workers rarely look after their health. So that, it can impact to their health mental or physical. Nevertheless, there are also had good luck on many workers reality for the expectation of job satisfaction, big company sometimes get a care for their workers for example they also can give an extra salary for their workers as a gift for workers hardwork. So that, workers can get easily for their individual well being. In conclusion, many factors who contribute to job satisfaction not always suitable with the realistic to get easily individual well being.
It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
said that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who
mostly
spend their life at workplace and search about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
Possible spelling mistake found.
wellbeing
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfaction
is the one of all
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
factor to influence it. This essay
Did you mean simply "discusses the"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discusses about the
factors contribute to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfaction
and expectation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfaction
for all workers.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
Possible spelling mistake found.
jobseekers
in all the world looking for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
what they
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
want or
they like. It can
be said
if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
or work for their,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
can be a reason why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfaction
can arise on
Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "workers'" or "worker's"?
workers
life.
Secondly
, about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
salary
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in the world who works as an employee almost have reason why
Did you mean "they're always looking", "they are always looking", or "they were always looking"?
they always looking
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
, the main reason is the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
always offer a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
salary
for new employee,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
if they have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
salary
, they can reach an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
Possible spelling mistake found.
wellbeing
.

However
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
it depends on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
or the place they look for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
. To reach an expectation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfaction
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workers
works too much
even though
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
what they do as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
as desired.
For example
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workers
always late to go home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they had an extra
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
in the workplace or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workers
rarely look after their health.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that, it can impact to their health mental or physical.
Nevertheless
, there are
also
had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
luck on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "workers'" or "worker's"?
workers
reality for the expectation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfaction
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a care for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workers
for example
they
also
can give an extra
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
salary
for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workers
as a gift for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workers
Possible spelling mistake found.
hardwork
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workers
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
easily
for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well being
.

In conclusion
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factors who contribute to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfaction
not always suitable with the realistic to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
easily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well being
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts