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As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.

In the new era of rapid globalization languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin are becoming more widely used, while a large number of minority languages is on the brick of dying out. Some countries decided to take steps to try and conserve those languages and I think it is a great practice and more countries should protect endangered tongues. Every language has a long-lasting history and is essential part of peoples heritage. In other words, every language is a valuable part of a culture and its extinction will inevitably damage this culture. As a result of it many traditional songs, poems and stories can go missing, and people will not have a chance to explore and learn from it. For instance, my first language is Kazakh language and even though it is not dying out, it is clearly losing its popularity among young people, because they think it is irrelevant. If one day it will be forgotten our folklore will follow suit. It addition, an extinction of a language will lead to losing important information this language possesses. Every society tries to learn more about its environment but if a tongue will disappear, every piece of knowledge in it will disappear too. For example, books, articles and other society’s wisdom will be gone. To sum up, I think that countries should put a lot of effort to protect minority languages, because they are a part of different cultures and contain a lot of useful information.
In the new era of rapid globalization
languages
such as English, Spanish and Mandarin are becoming more
widely
used
, while
a large number of
minority
languages
is on the brick of dying out.
Some
countries decided to take steps to
try and
conserve those
languages
and I
think
it is a great practice and more countries should protect endangered tongues.

Every
language
has a long-lasting history and is essential part of peoples heritage.
In other words
, every
language
is a valuable part of a culture and its extinction will
inevitably
damage this culture.
As a result
of it
many
traditional songs, poems and stories can go missing, and
people
will not have a chance to explore and learn from it.
For instance
, my
first
language
is Kazakh
language
and
even though
it is not dying out, it is
clearly
losing its popularity among young
people
,
because
they
think
it is irrelevant.
If
one day it will
be forgotten
our folklore will follow suit.

It
addition, an extinction of a
language
will lead to losing
important
information this
language
possesses. Every society tries to learn more about its environment
but
if a tongue will disappear, every piece of knowledge in it will disappear too.
For example
, books, articles and other society’s wisdom will
be gone
.

To sum up, I
think
that countries should put
a lot of
effort to protect minority
languages
,
because
they are a part of
different
cultures and contain
a lot of
useful information.
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IELTS essay As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.

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