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As country have developed it can be seen that small families

As country have developed it can be seen that small families PkB7g
It is seen that in many countries families are becoming smaller people prefer to live alone independently. this development has occurred due to job searching or it's their personal preference. the two main reasons of increasing number of nuclear family's are immigration and getting influenced by the western culture. in search of job or to pursue a good education young generation moves out of their house. for instance, if a person moves for the education or job he settles there and start a family far from his parents'because of the job. apart from this other countries are followingwestern culture and trying to copy them and Move out from their house. for example if someone watched people living by their own and having small family so they get influenced and do the same. so it's necessary to some and choice to others. some possible solutions can be creating more job opportunities for people so they don't have to leave their parents and another is spreading awareness about the importance of having family. by having more good opportunity people can stay close to their parents. furthermore, understanding the importance of family will lead to staying with them and it can solve the problem to some extent. to conclude,
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IELTS essay As country have developed it can be seen that small families

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
206 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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