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Are private schools better than state schools? discuss?

Are private schools better than state schools? discuss? e5QBA

It is a well-known consideration that there is a great disparity between private and public schools as the private one gives more opportunities for children to receive well-qualified education. In my point of view, both have an individual approach to nurture future employees. To begin with, it is true that private institutions have priorities over state schools simply because parents of private school pupils pay appropriate taxes for a better scholarship for their children. Furthermore, the discipline in private schools is more likely to be monitored by authorities than in public schools, where the cases of rule-breaking are outraced even now. Children of private schools, in fact, are more socially secured and are also subjected to wholly engross on studying process as their ambition is to become a productive person of the community. Nevertheless, the parents of children who attend private school tend to provide their offspring with a better quality of life including schooling. On the other hand, state schools have no fewer standards in offering its attenders to acquire relevant knowledge in order to succeed in life. Therefore, I consider that the adults who graduated a local high school have equal potential to maintain his or her own life. My friend, in fact, after 4 years of state school and two 2 extra years in university became a renowned lawyer on a global scale. Consequently, even children from public schools are willingly trying to work really hard to achieve their goals as other children from a private school do. To conclude, Regardless of the financial conditions both private and public schools are able to provide children with well-funded education.

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