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Any country should be able to sell goods (food,vehicles) to another country without any government restrictions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Any country should be able to sell goods (food, vehicles) to another country without any government restrictions. w2Gl
towards are one of the most powerful item for the countries that give the production to their markets. However, l agree that country selling goods to other countries without government restriction for two main reasons. Firstly, it is widely that in this period there are many countries in the worldwide. So each of them have has their own productions such as food, energy and so one; however, the country should not mixed the authority to the selling.
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are one of the most powerful item for the
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countries
that give the production to their markets.
However
, l
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agree
that
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country
selling
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goods
to other
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countries
without
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government
restriction for two main reasons.
Firstly
, it is
widely
that in this period there are
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many
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countries
in the worldwide.
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So
each of them have has their
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own
productions such as food, energy and
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so
one;
however
, the
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country
should not
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the authority to the selling.

IELTS essay Any country should be able to sell goods (food, vehicles) to another country without any government restrictions.

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