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An amplifier has a lot of small nobs. All of them looks the same. Due to similarity, no nob stands out more than the others. If uniform connectedness was used, the interface can be understand more easily.

An amplifier has a lot of small nobs. All of them looks the same. Due to similarity, no nob stands out more than the others. If uniform connectedness was used, the interface can be understand more easily. yXLAV
An amplifier has a lot of small nobs. All of them looks the same. Due to similarity, no nob stands out more than the others. If uniform connectedness was used, the interface can be understand more easily. These are a set of icon captured from an app called Tide. They are symbolic icons. However, not all icons are easy to understand. Most of them are too abstract to represent the action, concept and so on.
An amplifier has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
nobs. All of them looks the same. Due to similarity, no nob stands out more than the others.

If uniform connectedness was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
, the interface can be
Consider using the past participle "understood"?
understand
more
easily
.

These are a set of icon captured from an app called Tide.

They are symbolic icons.
However
, not all icons are easy to understand. Most of them are too abstract to represent the action, concept and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on.
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IELTS essay An amplifier has a lot of small nobs. All of them looks the same. Due to similarity, no nob stands out more than the others. If uniform connectedness was used, the interface can be understand more easily.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
75 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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