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Although there are more and more women police officers in reality, are they really suitable for this job

Although there are more and more women police officers in reality, are they really suitable for this job EX0Q
I strongly believe that women are completely suitable for this job, in fact not only for this but they are fit for every job. Women always has been considered less suited for jobs in contrast to men but the reality is something different. Whichever sector women are working with they are on pinnacle of it. The same is true with police jobs. Many women have reached on epitome of the police department and they are no less than men. There are several complex cases where the involvement of women cops is mandatory. For instances the cases related to prostitution, women traficking and juvenile cases. In many of the cases it has ben observed that women police have better ability to get confessions from culprits and in juvenile cases as well the victim felt more comfortable with women police than with men police. Taking all this into consideration various special teams of women cops are formed. In most of the countries they have law that only women cops can arrest the women culprits because they are more capable of handling these kind of cases. Women have been found mettle with their jobs. Moreover women are splendid to conform the department regulations. To conclude women are equal to men and in some cases even better. No wonder we are seeing more and more female cops.
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are completely suitable for this
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, in fact not
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for this
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they
are fit
for every
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always has
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less suited for
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jobs
in contrast
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men
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sector
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are working with they are on pinnacle of it. The same is true with
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police
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jobs
.
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women
have reached on epitome of the
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police
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department and
they are no less than
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men
. There are several complex cases where the involvement of
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women
cops is mandatory. For instances the cases related to prostitution,
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women
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traficking
and juvenile cases. In
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of the cases it has
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observed that
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women
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police
have better ability to
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confessions from culprits and in juvenile cases
as well
the victim felt more comfortable with
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women
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police
than with
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men
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police
. Taking all this into consideration various special teams of
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women
cops
are formed
. In most of the countries they have law that
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women
cops can arrest the
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women
culprits
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because
they are more capable of handling
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have
been found
mettle with their
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jobs
.
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Moreover
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are splendid to conform the department regulations.
To conclude
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women
are equal to
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men
and in
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some
cases even better. No wonder we are seeing more and more female cops.
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IELTS essay Although there are more and more women police officers in reality, are they really suitable for this job

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
223 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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