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do you agree or disagree with the following statement?all high school students should be required to have three years of studying a foreign language.use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

all high school students should be required to have three years of studying a foreign language. use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. MMwYe
Nowadays the communications are raised and spread the condition of living is changed. Everything is not like before, learning another languages is so necessary for everything. Especially learning English language for those countries that their first language is not English. I will try to examine below the specific reasons for illustrating my opinion. These days there is no boundary for learning. A student may be accepted in a university in another country and need to learn the language of that area. For example; in my country, Iran, our first language and maternal language is Persian while if I want to apply for another universities in Canada and U. S. A, I’m supposed to know English very well because it’s the first and formal language in these countries and moreover it is the first international language. Furthermore, for people who their job is about trade and business especially in the whole world, it is so vital to know English at least, or they may be needed to know French or other common languages that are in 5 top languages rate in the global. For speaking, writing and making connections with others in foreign countries, the need of knowing another language is feeling. Apart the points I made above, living in different areas and maybe migration to another continent or country need to know their language. The basic necessity for being in society and taking participant in the social environments, is talking to others to transport our opinions and on the contrary understanding their speeches and viewpoints. A simple example is that for buying the primary needs from supermarket we have to know the language of that area. For speaking to salesperson, explaining what we want all we need is language. To sum up, for the points that were stated above learning another languages is a good guarantee for the future of the students, for their job, education and finally their life.
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is not English. I will try to examine below the specific reasons for illustrating my opinion.

These days there is no boundary for
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learning
. A student may be
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accepted
in a university in another
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country
and
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need
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language
of that area.
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; in my
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country
, Iran, our
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first
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language
and maternal
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language
is Persian while if I want to apply for another universities in Canada and U. S. A, I’m supposed to
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know
English
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well
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and formal
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language
in these
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and
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international language.

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people
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especially
in the whole world, it is
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English at least, or they may
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French or other common
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languages
that are in 5 top
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languages
rate in the global. For speaking, writing and making connections with others in foreign
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countries
, the
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need
of knowing another
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language
is feeling.

Apart the points I made above, living in
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different
areas and maybe migration to another continent or
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country
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need
to
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know
their
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language
. The basic necessity for being in society and taking participant in the social environments, is talking to others to transport our opinions and
on the contrary
understanding their speeches and viewpoints. A simple example is that for buying the primary
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needs
from supermarket we
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have to
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know
the
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language
of that area. For speaking to salesperson, explaining what we want all we
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need
is language.

To sum up, for the points that
were stated
above
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learning
another
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languages
is a
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good
guarantee for the future of the students, for their job, education and
finally
their life.

IELTS essay all high school students should be required to have three years of studying a foreign language. use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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