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Some person thini that news and media nowadays have influenced people s lives in negative ways. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Some person thini that news and media nowadays have influenced people s lives in negative ways. O8eG
Certain individuals believe that these days newspapers and television channels that broadcast current affairs have a bad influence on society. I completely disagree with the given statement. In the following paragraphs, I would put forth the arguments in favour of my views. News channels have influenced society in many positive ways. To begin with, the usefulness of media, which provides news almost instantaneously, is undeniable. This gives us a feeling that we belong to a small global village. Secondly, it acts as a bridge between the government and the people. Most of us would never meet a prime minister or president in our lives but anyone who is regularly watching news or reading newspapers would certainly know about them. Furthermore, media plays an important role in spreading different cultures and lifestyles to the modern world. Today, the popularity of Indian culture and tradition across the globe is the best possible example of media’s enormous impact. Finally, news channels also help in providing justice to common man when his rights are being As every rose has thorns, media too has its downside. The paparazzi could invade the privacy of celebrities. Sometimes violence and vulgarity are shown, and at times, it can shape us in negative ways. For that my counter-argument is that once a person becomes famous then his personal life becomes public, and he has no right to complain about paparazzi. Also, people can choose what they want to see and technology has provided options to block the channels that they do not want to see. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that the influence of media on our lives is largely positive.
Certain individuals believe that these days newspapers and television
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channels
that broadcast
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current
affairs have a
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bad
influence on society. I completely disagree with the
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given
statement. In the following paragraphs, I would put forth the arguments in
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favour
of my views.

News
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channels
have influenced society in
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many
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positive
ways. To
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begin
with, the usefulness of
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media
, which provides news almost
instantaneously
, is undeniable. This gives us a feeling that we belong to a
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small
global village.
Secondly
, it acts as a bridge between the
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government
and the
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people
. Most of us would never
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meet
a prime minister or president in our
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lives
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but
anyone who is
regularly
watching news or reading newspapers would
certainly
know about them.
Furthermore
,
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media
plays an
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important
role in spreading
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different
cultures and lifestyles to the modern world.
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Today
, the popularity of Indian culture and tradition across the globe is the best possible example of
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media’s
enormous impact.
Finally
, news
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channels
also
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help
in providing justice to common
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man
when his rights are being

As every rose has thorns,
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media
too has its downside. The paparazzi could invade the privacy of celebrities.
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Sometimes
violence and vulgarity
are shown
, and at times, it can shape us in
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negative
ways. For that my counter-argument is that once a person becomes
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famous
then his personal life becomes public, and he has no right to complain about paparazzi.
Also
,
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people
can choose what they want to
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see
and technology has provided options to block the
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channels
that they do not want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
.

In conclusion
, I would like to reiterate that the influence of
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media
on our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
is
largely
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positive
.
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IELTS essay Some person thini that news and media nowadays have influenced people s lives in negative ways.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
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