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Over the last one and a half years, Airblue airlines has experienced financial crises due to Covid-19 pandemic that directly impacted the company’s bottom lines. We explored all possible options including salary deductions. Unfortunately, our efforts remained unsuccessful, and we perceive that we must reduce our labor force to ensure the company’s financial stability. After analysing the situation, we have concluded that we must terminate almost 100 job positions. And I regret to inform you that your position is one that will be eliminated on 10th june 2021. Our official meeting will be on 6th june 2021 held by the human resources representatives in which you will be aware of available separation benefits and ways to find out respectful job. We respect and appreciate the work you did for Airblue airlines, and we wish you the best for your future course of action.
Over the last one and a half years,
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Airblue
airlines has experienced financial crises due to Covid-19 pandemic that
directly
impacted the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s bottom lines. We explored all possible options including salary deductions. Unfortunately, our efforts remained unsuccessful, and we perceive that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
our labor force to ensure the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s financial stability.

After
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analysing
the situation, we have concluded that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
terminate almost 100 job positions. And I regret to inform you that your position is one that will
be eliminated
on 10th
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june
2021.

Our official meeting will be on 6th
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june
2021 held by the human resources representatives in which you will be aware of available separation benefits and ways to find out respectful job.

We respect and appreciate the work you did for
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Airblue
airlines, and we wish you the best for your future course of action.
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IELTS essay Advertising the brand to attract the audience

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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