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According to research , characteristics born with play important role In development of personality . however others believe that experience is important . which one do you think is important for personality development people tend to focus on building experience rather than to bridge your ex character

According to research, characteristics born with play important role In development of personality. however others believe that experience is important. which one do you think is important for personality development people tend to focus on building experience rather than to bridge your ex character 156D7
Nowadays Personality plays vital roles in everyday life and in addition to this characteristics makes more merits whereas experience in special field or expertise in your skill makes difference. In my opinion experience is game changer in personality development. People tend to focus on building experience rather than to bridge your character. There are myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is to build experience is vital rather than character as the way of behavior, presentative speech, positive approaches, calm reaction and the like. Whereas Experience do matters allover as well as impact work culture and lead to continue learning. Another pivotal aspect is Experience comes from childhood itself in case of learning we can get experience with studying more with excellence in school and college as well as it reflect for further growth of ample of opportunity. Little example which linked this discussion was one of my junior in past office joined as trainee she was with very pretty good character but due to lake of experience in field she broke two costly instruments in laboratory and major problems in office. In view of arguments outlined, one can sum up that experience and characteristics both sides of coin and having equally values in personality development but to explore more skills experience is indeed too great to ignore.
Nowadays Personality plays vital roles in everyday life and
in addition
to
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this
characteristics
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makes
more merits whereas
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experience
in special field or expertise in your
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skill
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makes
difference. In my opinion
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experience
is game changer in personality development.
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People
tend to focus on building
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
rather
than to bridge your character.

There are myriad of arguments in
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favour
of my stance. The most conspicuous one is to build
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
is vital
rather
than character as the way of behavior,
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presentative
speech,
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positive
approaches, calm reaction and the like. Whereas
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Experience
do matters allover
as well
as impact work culture and lead to continue learning.

Another pivotal aspect is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Experience
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
from childhood itself in case of learning we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
with studying more with excellence in school and college
as well
as it reflect for
further
growth of ample of opportunity.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Little
example which linked this discussion was one of my junior in past office
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
as trainee she was with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
pretty
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
character
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
due to lake of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
in field she broke two costly instruments in laboratory and major problems in office.

In view of arguments outlined, one can sum up that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
and characteristics both sides of coin and having
equally
values in personality development
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
to explore more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
is
indeed
too great to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
.
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IELTS essay According to research, characteristics born with play important role In development of personality. however others believe that experience is important. which one do you think is important for personality development people tend to focus on building experience rather than to bridge your ex character

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