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about your favorite book.

about your favorite book. Aj3al
The story is about the diary life around family, friend and the love-hate relationship of the main female character during 10 years. The main characters are a girl who has special situation and two boys, one is her soulmate and others is her close - classmate. The story has open-ending. The main female character go abroad without any messages saying goodbye to two main male characters. I highly recommend my friend would enjoy this book, because, some memories of student and what happens in diary life in that books are similar to us. When I read the book, I can see shadow of myself in it. I have a tendency to read the review of any book before reading it. When I saw that book, the topic of it was different from all books I had read before, was impressed me. That is the reason why I made a decision to read it. It was such a page turner that I couldn't remember exactly how long I read it from cover to cover. Maybe one week. As far as I can tell, I wouldn't like to read something else by the same author. I always think that, each author will have the most great product in all his or her career. No one is better than that. The book told a diary life and a love story between a girl and two boys during 10 years. The story had a open-ending that the girl go abroad without any messages saying goodbye to two boys. The reason why the book impressed me is that storyline is familiar with my reality life. Up to now, that book is the most impressed book for me. I have found any book like that. In my opinion, a book with open-ending, talk about love story and diary life is suitable for people who is live real life. It is a thick book with hundreds papers. Its cover is a scene of classroom, decorated by warm color like slightly pink, yellow, beige, . . . The topic of the book in Vietnamese name is ''Thoi thanh xuan am ap khong the quay lai ay''. It is composed by a Chinese author. After a period of time reading online in the black website, I make a decision to buy it from a good bookstore. Compare it other books I have or know about, the book is the most great book for me. The story is open-ending, so that, I really impress and always curious about it.
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is about the
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diary
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life
around family, friend and the
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love
-hate relationship of the
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main
female
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character
during 10 years. The
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main
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characters
are a girl who has special situation and two boys, one is her soulmate
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and others
is her close
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classmate.
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The
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has open-ending.
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The
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main
female
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character
go abroad without any messages saying goodbye to two
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main
male
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. I
highly
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book
,
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some
memories of student and what happens in
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diary
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life
in that
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books
are similar to us. When I
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, I can
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the review of any
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book
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before
reading it. When I
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that
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, the topic of it was
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I had
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read
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before
,
was impressed
me.
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the reason why I made a decision to
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read
it. It was such a page turner that I couldn't remember exactly how long I
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read
it from cover to cover. Maybe one week. As far as I can
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tell
, I wouldn't like to
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read
something else by the same author. I always
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think
that, each author will have
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the most great
product in all
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his or her
career. No one is better than that. The
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book
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told
a
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diary
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life
and a
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love
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story
between a girl and two boys during 10 years. The
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had
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open-ending that the girl go abroad without any messages saying goodbye to two boys.
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reason why the
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impressed me is that storyline is familiar with my reality
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life
. Up to
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, that
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is the most impressed
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for me. I have found any
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like that. In my opinion, a
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with open-ending, talk about
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love
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and
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is suitable for
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who
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. It is a thick
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with hundreds papers. Its cover is a scene of classroom, decorated by warm color like
slightly
pink, yellow, beige
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The topic of the
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in Vietnamese name is ''
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Thoi
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thanh
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xuan
am
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khong
the quay
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''. It
is composed
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make
a decision to
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buy
it from a
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bookstore. Compare it other
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books
I have or know about, the
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is
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the most great
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for me. The
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is open-ending,
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that, I
really
impress and always curious about it.
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IELTS essay about your favorite book.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
419 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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