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A room without books is like a body without a soul

A room without books is like a body without a soul aEAMY
Different people have different ideas so some people think that a room without books is like a body without a soul, while others disagree. As for me, I think every person have to read books, to be more intelligent than they are. It will not be an exaggeration if I say, that knowledge is the most important aspect in our life. To illustrate if person want to be successful, have a lot of money and buy anything without think twice he have to study, read books and improve skills. On my opinion, if reading book broaden our mind and soul, for instance if person want to travel abroad, they need to know at least an international language to communicate people and introduce their culture. Overall, taking everything to consideration to sum up benefit. Nowadays books play a vital role in our education and constitute a major part our life. Books are a great medium of knowledge but it should not be compared with intellectual stuff like body and soul
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. On my opinion, if reading
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broaden our mind and soul,
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if person want to travel abroad, they need to know at least an international language to communicate
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and introduce their culture.
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, taking everything to consideration to sum up benefit. Nowadays
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play a vital role in our education and constitute a major part our life.
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IELTS essay A room without books is like a body without a soul

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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