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A number of people have a tendency to think that all of the entertainment TV programmes had better focus on societal problems. From the past few years ago, TV programmes are significantly more informative rather than poems and novels. I agree with this viewpoint and there reasons will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, young generation has been inspired and influenced by entertainment TV programmes. However, they generate a huge amount of interest to achieve bigger in their lives too. Through these TV shows, somehow, people will be able to indulge themselves into various types of societal activities. Here, I talk about an Indian reality show, known as Roadies, for example, in 2019, in which they show us the revolutions done by numerous people for the environment, society and animals too. Moreover, this will motivate people to help the needy. Secondly, awareness about the societal issues. To explain, directors made their entertainment shows with meaningful lessons so

A number of people have a tendency to think that all of the entertainment TV programmes had better focus on societal problems. From the past few years ago, TV programmes are significantly more informative rather than poems and novels. I agree with this viewpoint and there reasons will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, young generation has been inspired and influenced by entertainment TV programmes. However, they generate a huge amount of interest to achieve bigger in their lives too. Through these TV shows, somehow, people will be able to indulge themselves into various types of societal activities. Here, I talk about an Indian reality show, known as Roadies, for example, in 2019, in which they show us the revolutions done by numerous people for the environment, society and animals too. Moreover, this will motivate people to help the needy. Secondly, awareness about the societal issues. To explain, directors made their entertainment shows with meaningful lessons so rQGN
A number of people have a tendency to think that all of the entertainment TV programmes had better focus on societal problems. From the past few years ago, TV programmes are significantly more informative rather than poems and novels. I agree with this viewpoint and there reasons will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, young generation has been inspired and influenced by entertainment TV programmes. However, they generate a huge amount of interest to achieve bigger in their lives too. Through these TV shows, somehow, people will be able to indulge themselves into various types of societal activities. Here, I talk about an Indian reality show, known as Roadies, for example, in 2019, in which they show us the revolutions done by numerous people for the environment, society and animals too. Moreover, this will motivate people to help the needy. Secondly, awareness about the societal issues. To explain, directors made their entertainment shows with meaningful lessons so that people can gain valuable information about social risks. As they are able to relate the problems happening around them. For instance, shows such as CID, crime patrol and so on educate viewers about societal issues that they are not aware of. Therefore, people can tackle these problems with some tips and tricks shown by TV programmes. In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is so crucial for all entertainment TV programmes to add meaningful advice to assist people to be able to alert themselves with critical things happening around them. In my opinion, directors should make shows that are more informative for people.
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have a tendency to
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think
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all of the
entertainment TV
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programmes
had better focus on societal problems. From the past few years ago, TV
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programmes
are
significantly
more informative
rather
than poems and novels. I
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agree
with this viewpoint and there reasons will
be discussed
in upcoming paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, young generation has
been inspired
and influenced by entertainment TV
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programmes
.
However
, they generate a huge amount of interest to achieve bigger in their
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lives
too. Through these TV
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shows
, somehow,
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people
will be able to indulge themselves into various types of societal activities. Here, I talk about an Indian reality
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show
, known as Roadies,
for example
, in 2019, in which they
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show
us the revolutions done by numerous
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people
for the environment, society and animals too.
Moreover
, this will motivate
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people
to
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help
the needy.

Secondly
, awareness about the societal issues. To
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explain
, directors made their entertainment
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shows
with meaningful lessons
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so
that
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people
can gain valuable information about social
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risks
.
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they are able to relate the problems happening around them.
For instance
,
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shows
such as CID, crime patrol and
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so
on educate viewers about societal issues that they are not aware of.
Therefore
,
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people
can tackle these problems with
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some
tips and tricks shown by TV
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programmes
.

In conclusion
, I
firmly
believe that it is
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so
crucial for all entertainment TV
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programmes
to
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add
meaningful advice to assist
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people
to be able to alert themselves with critical things happening around them. In my opinion, directors should
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make
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shows
that are more informative for
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people
.
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IELTS essay A number of people have a tendency to think that all of the entertainment TV programmes had better focus on societal problems. From the past few years ago, TV programmes are significantly more informative rather than poems and novels. I agree with this viewpoint and there reasons will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, young generation has been inspired and influenced by entertainment TV programmes. However, they generate a huge amount of interest to achieve bigger in their lives too. Through these TV shows, somehow, people will be able to indulge themselves into various types of societal activities. Here, I talk about an Indian reality show, known as Roadies, for example, in 2019, in which they show us the revolutions done by numerous people for the environment, society and animals too. Moreover, this will motivate people to help the needy. Secondly, awareness about the societal issues. To explain, directors made their entertainment shows with meaningful lessons so

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