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4. What are the differences between small companies and big companies?

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Well, a range of underlying differences can be seen between small businesses and large companies. However, I guess the most important would be that small corporations often focus on a niche market, while larger companies have a tendency to offer more products and services to a wider variety of consumers. To illustrate, a small company with only a few employees might be able to make enough money to survive by selling a single product or service in a very specific market. As companies grow, they tend to branch out into new markets and offer new products and services to increase sales and hire more employees. Additionally, large corporations can raise money by selling shares of stock to the public and by selling corporate bonds whereas new small businesses typically receive financing from the personal savings of owners, small business loans from banks, and gifts or loans from friends and family members.
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grow, they tend to branch out into new markets and offer new products and services to increase sales and hire more employees.
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IELTS essay 4. What are the differences between small companies and big companies?

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151 words
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