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Professional Nurse’ is my passion always. Truly saying that my mother is my motivator and mentor in this matter. She is a nurse by profession and I heard many stories in regards to a nurse-patient relationship, which always made me either cry or proud to be a nurse. From her stories I learned that nurse can act in many roles as a listener, educator, healer, companion, friend and so on. Moreover, the health care system demands teamwork and hard work which I appreciate the most. When I entered the same field, I can feel that emotions that motivate me always to do my best. Every one of my clients is now my energy to move forward, their blessings and prayers are my strong hands to excel in my personal and professional life. I will consider that this opportunity is one of the greatest gifts to excel me and in future, I will be devoting and exploring myself to the world.

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Nurse’
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mentor
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nurse
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many
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nurse-patient
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nurse
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her stories I learned that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withassistantattendanttherapistmedicregistered nurse
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companion, friend and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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hard


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work
 which I appreciate the most. When I entered the same field, I can feel Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthat.that!that?that:that,that;
that


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterEmotions
emotions
 that motivate me always to do my best. Every one of my clients is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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my


energy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 forward, their blessings and prayers are my strong hands to excel in my

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPersonal
personal
 and professional life. I will consider that this opportunity is one of the greatest Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphgifts.gifts!gifts?gifts:gifts,gifts;
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to
 excel me and Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
, I will be devoting and exploring myself to the world. 