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Exports of various industries products between the years 2015 and 2016

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The data populated in the bar chart depicts the exports of various industries products, and the table chart explains the alluded ratio changes between the years 2015 and 2016. Overall, The growth of textiles products is soared higher than other industries, which is followed by engineered products. on the other hand, there is a descended ratio reported in gems and jewellery products. Firstly, in the year 2015. The petroleum product recorded highest among other industrial goods, which is 60 percent, followed by engineered product that is three percentage share descended to petroleum. The other three commodities are gems-jewelry, agricultural products, and textiles. In 2016, the significant trends were from the textile industry, which is 15. 24 percent greater than itself in 2015. Meanwhile, engineered goods soared by an 8. 5 rate. Surprisingly, Gems and Jewellery products dip by 5. 18 percent, and the petroleum products climbed to 64 percentage rate, which is 3 percent higher than in 2015. Eventually, Agricultural products ascended by 0. 81 rates.
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industries, which
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.
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jewellery
products.

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recorded highest among
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industrial
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, followed by engineered
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three percentage share descended to petroleum. The
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three commodities are gems-jewelry, agricultural
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, and textiles.

In 2016, the significant trends were from the textile industry, which is 15. 24
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greater than itself in 2015. Meanwhile, engineered
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goods
soared

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Jewellery
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dip by 5. 18
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, and the petroleum
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climbed to 64 percentage rate,

which is 3
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higher than in 2015.
Eventually
, Agricultural
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ascended by 0. 81 rates.

IELTS academic Exports of various industries products between the years 2015 and 2016

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