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Xyz radio listeners since 1940

Xyz radio listeners since 1940 BJ15d

The line graph show that how to change XYZ radio listeners between 1940 and 20301. XYZ radio listeners had an enormous climb 85000 from 20000 to 105000 between 1940 and 1955. But then there was a dramatic decline from 105000 to 20000 between 1955 and 1960; however, radio listeners sow a partial growth from 20000 to 30000 between 1960 and 1965. Alter that there was period of instability XYZ listeners from 1965 to 1975. Then Radio listeners decreased significantly from 45000 to 15000 between 1975 and 1980. There were mild fluctuations in the number of the XYZ listeners from 1980 to 2000; however, the number listeners grew minimally till 2015. Then there was leveling out radio listeners from 20000 to 40000 between 2015 and 2020. After 2020 there will be a slight increase of radio listeners from 2020 to 2030. Then radio listeners there will remain sable after 2030.

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 XYZ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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 listeners between 1940 and 20301. XYZ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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 listeners had an enormous climb 85000 from 20000 to 105000 between 1940 and 1955. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 then there was a dramatic decline from 105000 to 20000 between 1955 and 1960; however
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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 listeners sow a partial growth from 20000 to 30000 between 1960 and 1965.

Alter that there was period of instability XYZ listeners from 1965 to 1975. Then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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 listeners decreased significantly
 from 45000 to 15000 between 1975 and 1980. There were mild fluctuations in the number of the XYZ listeners from 1980 to 2000; however
, the number listeners grew minimally
 till 2015.

Then there was leveling out You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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 listeners from 20000 to 40000 between 2015 and 2020. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 2020 there will be a slight increase of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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 listeners from 2020 to 2030.

Then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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 listeners there will remain sable after 2030. 