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This bar graph tells us about the travel and commuting time of 6 European countries along with the average EU. Horizontal and vertical lines are shown here, with the straight line representing units [km and minutes] and the perpendicular line representing countries. To begin with, as shown in the diagram, most people in Denmark use cars as the mode of transport meanwhile, Spanish citizens are using it less. Subsequently other means of passage, like trains, buses, metro. It is astounding to learn that Denmark is ranked Rose, while compared to the United Kingdom is ranked last. Lastly the commuting time. Most of the drivers in these countries do all modes of communication. They work for 45mins in the UK and Germany, unlike in Italy, they work less than 25 minutes. In conclusion, Denmark takes same in all modes of communication and time, not only this on the contrary but also Italy, as it is not too high and low. It is similar to that of Denmark.
This bar graph
tells
us about the travel and commuting time of 6 European countries along with the average EU. Horizontal and vertical lines
are shown
here, with the straight line representing units [km and minutes] and the perpendicular line representing countries. To
begin
with, as shown in the diagram, most
people
in Denmark
use
cars as the mode of transport meanwhile, Spanish citizens are using it less.
Subsequently
other means of passage, like trains, buses, metro. It is astounding to learn that Denmark
is ranked
Rose, while compared to the United Kingdom
is ranked
last.
Lastly
the commuting time. Most of the drivers in these countries do all modes of communication. They work for 45mins in the UK and Germany, unlike in Italy, they work less than 25 minutes.
In conclusion
, Denmark takes same in all modes of communication and time, not
only
this
on the contrary
but
also
Italy, as it is not too high and low. It is similar to that of Denmark.
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IELTS academic es, and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Bar Chart IELTS Bar Chart IELTS Bar Chart

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1 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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