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The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. PR0O2
The bar chart depicts the number of students from five different regions, India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia and Colombia, enrolled at three universities. Overall, Indian students have the highest enrolment numbers, while, on the contrary, Colombian students have the lowest. In terms of Smithtown University, India has the most enrolments, at around 6000 students, while Colombia has just under 1000 international student. Regarding University of Riverview, India also has the highest number of 7500 students' enrolments, which is also the most substantial figure across all responses. With reference to Earlwood University, there is just under 1000 students who originated in Colombia enrolled at this school, whereas the total number of Indian enrolments is five times as great. Nepal students preference over Smithtown and Earlwood universities is equivalent with 4000 enrolments. The same goes for Indonesia as the two aforementioned schools share the same figure of 1000 enrolments. The University of Riverview records the number of 5000 students who come from Nepal and just over 1000 Indonesian students. Vietnam's figure is the most varied with 2000 students enrolled at Smithtown, 3000 students at Earlwood and over 3500 students at University of Riverview.
The bar chart depicts the
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regions, India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia and Colombia, enrolled at three
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have the highest
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, Colombian
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have the lowest.

In terms of
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Smithtown
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, India has the most
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, at around 6000
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, while Colombia has
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under 1000 international
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. Regarding
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University
of Riverview, India
also
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of 7500 students'
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, which is
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Earlwood
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University
, there is
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under 1000
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students
who originated in Colombia enrolled at this school, whereas the total
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of Indian
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is five times as great.

Nepal
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preference over
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Earlwood
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is equivalent with 4000
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. The same goes for Indonesia as the two aforementioned schools share the same figure of 1000
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enrolments
. The
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of Riverview records the
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from Nepal and
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over 1000 Indonesian
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enrolled at
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, 3000
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