Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

where is your hometown? Can you describe a little bit about yorn hometown? What do you like most about yorn hometown? Does yorn hometown have a lot of tourist?

where is your hometown? Can you describe a little bit about yorn hometown? What do you like most about yorn hometown? Does yorn hometown have a lot of tourist? M3NMa
My hometown called My Tho city. The city is name after the My Tho River. It is regional center of economics, education and technology. I was born and grow up there and i can say it is my favourite place. It is located in the south of VietNam. The city is modern, because it is starting to be devoloped just like other province. It is about 3 hours bus from here to HCM city. My hometown is also special as it offers Vinh Trang pagoda, Dong Tam's Snake farm with reptile such as chameleon, cobra, king cobra, alligator. And My Tho city was the first in southern VietNam to have a high school. The college de My Tho, opened in March 1879, now called Nguyen Dinh Chieu high school. It was one of the first school Viet Nam had, and even now is still known fot its educational quality among Southern school. It has been pursed by young peole in VietNam. When you talk about My Tho city most people will think to hu tieu My Tho, because it very famous in My Tho. In the long-term, I am hopping this place is going to develop better.
My hometown called My Tho city. The city is name after
Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "My"?
the My
Tho River. It is regional center of economics, education and technology. I
was born
and grow up there and
Did you mean "I"?
i
can say it is my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
place. It
is located
in the south of
Possible spelling mistake found.
VietNam
. The city is modern,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is starting to be
Possible spelling mistake found.
devoloped
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
like other province. It is about 3 hours bus from here to
Possible spelling mistake found.
HCM
city. My hometown is
also
special as it offers
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vinh
Possible spelling mistake found.
Trang
pagoda, Dong Tam's Snake farm with reptile such as chameleon, cobra, king cobra, alligator. And My Tho city was the
first
in southern
Possible spelling mistake found.
VietNam
to have a high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. The college
Possible spelling mistake found.
de
My Tho, opened in March 1879,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
called Nguyen
Possible spelling mistake found.
Dinh
Possible spelling mistake found.
Chieu
high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. It was one of the
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
Possible spelling mistake found.
Viet
Nam had, and even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
is
still
known
Possible spelling mistake found.
fot
its educational quality among Southern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. It has
been pursed
by young
Possible spelling mistake found.
peole
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
VietNam
. When you talk about My Tho city most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
hu
Possible spelling mistake found.
tieu
My Tho,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
It seems that a verb is missing.
it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
in My Tho. In the long-term, I am hopping this place is going to develop better.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic where is your hometown? Can you describe a little bit about yorn hometown? What do you like most about yorn hometown? Does yorn hometown have a lot of tourist?

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    có cái nịt chứ đòi cái đề
    The bar chart represents the the number of the foreign visitors in differents Vietnamese resorts, namely Phu Quoc, Da Nang and Mui Ne between 2000 and 2006. Overall, it can be seen that foreign visitor numbers in Da Nang saw a downward trend, while the figue of Mui Ne increased significantly. Howev...
  • 5.5band
    Proportion of people of different age
    The line graph gives the detail regarding the proportion of people of different age groups rating on certain factor as there importance when they move to a new home. A preliminary investigation of the line graph reveals that crime rate is the most important factor for people of all age groups. At th...
  • 6band
    The given map gives us infor
    The given map gives us information about the changes that took place at Queen Mary Hospital construction between 1960 to 2000. A cursory glance that the map is adequate enough to show that in 1960, there was main road in the north side. After that, there we can seen in the east side, there was a ho...
  • 6.5band
    the table which shows the information on the UK unemployed spent their time last year.
    This report will sum up the table which shows the information on the UK unemployed spent their time last year. It is readily apparent from the data provided that far more females spent their time on housework in the morning, while most of males looked for a job in the morning. Looking at the inform...
  • 6band
    25-years study on distance travelled per person by bicycles in a year
    The table gives information of a quarter-century study on the bicycles used in Britain by age and gender. There is a spike in average numbers of distance in people of pre-teen to young adult. Additionally, trend of biking distance has been gradually decrease along the period of study. Over 25 years...
  • 6.5band
    The table compares the statistics about children's disadvantages between two elementary schools in the years 2005 and 2015.
    The table describes how many primary students ran into different educational difficulties in two schools in between the two years 2005 and 2015. As can be seen from the figures, although there had been some reduction in the percentage of kids learning in school A still faced more problems after a d...





Get more results for topic:
  • where is your hometown? Can you describe a little bit about yorn hometown? What do you like most about yorn hometown? Does yorn hometown have a lot of tourist?