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The given map gives us information about the changes that took place at Queen Mary Hospital construction between 1960 to 2000. A cursory glance that the map is adequate enough to show that in 1960, there was main road in the north side. After that, there we can seen in the east side, there was a hospital and a car park, which is located in south east side. Then, in the south west side, there was a farmland, which is close to shopping center. However, in 1980, there was no change in main road. Car park and hospital, but the pharmacy centre was a new development which is adjacent to the hospital. Not only this, nursing school was new build in the south west direction. Not only this, in the west side the cancer centre is also new constructed. Further looking at the third map of queen mary hospital in 2000, it can be clearly seen there was no change in pharmacy and hospital. After that, the Nursing school has been marged by cance centre. Moreover, the area of nursing school and car park has been decreased. overall, the map depicts the positive growth of queen mary hospital in 2000, the area of cance centre was increased as compared to other areas
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gives us information about the
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changes
that took place at Queen Mary
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Hospital
construction
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between 1960 to 2000
.

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map
is adequate
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enough
to
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show
that in 1960, there was main road in the north side. After that, there we can
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seen
in the east side, there was a
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hospital
and a car park, which
is located
in
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south east
side. Then, in the
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south west
side, there was a farmland, which is close to shopping center.
However
, in 1980, there was no
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change
in main road. Car park and
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hospital
,
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but
the pharmacy
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centre
was a new development which is adjacent to the
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hospital
. Not
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only
this, nursing school was new build in the
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south west
direction. Not
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only
this, in the west side the cancer
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centre
is
also
new constructed.

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Further
looking at the third
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of queen
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mary
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hospital
in 2000, it can be
clearly
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seen
there was no
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change
in pharmacy and
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hospital
. After that, the Nursing school has been
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marged
by
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cance
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centre
.
Moreover
, the area of nursing school and car park has
been decreased
.

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overall
, the
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map
depicts the
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positive
growth of queen
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mary
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hospital
in 2000, the area of
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cance
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centre
was increased
as compared to other areas
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4 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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