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The bar chart represents the the number of the foreign visitors in differents Vietnamese resorts, namely Phu Quoc, Da Nang and Mui Ne between 2000 and 2006. Overall, it can be seen that foreign visitor numbers in Da Nang saw a downward trend, while the figue of Mui Ne increased significantly. However, the number of people who visited Phu Quoc just changed a little bit over a period In 2000, the number of travellers in Da Nang was the highest point among 3 places, at approximately 900, 000 people. While, the tourists who travel to Phu Quoc is just a half of the people who go to Da Nang. In contrast, the figure of Mui Ne was started at about 300, 000 and rised gradually to 400, 000 in the next 2 years. After 6 years, the Da Nang resorts which showed the highest point in the 2000, suprisingly decreased sharply to under 300, 000. Meanwhile, the figure of Mui Ne increased considerably to over 900, 000, which is the peak among 3 destinations. About the Phu Quoc resort, there was no considerable changes from 2000 to 2006
The bar chart represents
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Phu
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Quoc
,
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Da
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Ne increased
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Quoc
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was the highest point among 3 places, at approximately 900, 000
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resort, there was no considerable
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changes
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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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