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These two maps display the alternation of clock tower roundabout in Dubai in recent decades. During the time period, some features have been changed in Dubai. One of the apparent differences between two pictures is residential area expansion, in particular, the number of buildings has been increased. In addition, in the past bushes were planted around the street but in present, they are all removed and now it can be seen the tower in the middle of the square is surrounded by tall pine trees. The most noticeable transition is the increasing number of cars in the street, now the street is full of cars that make roundabout crowded. In comparison, many parts of the roundabout have remained, in both past Dubai’s map and present map the structure of streets around the square is the same, also, the tower has stayed with no alternation. Overall the difference between two maps is not significant, there are only few minor changes during these decades in the clock tower roundabout.
These two
maps
display the alternation of clock tower

roundabout in Dubai in recent decades. During the time period,

some
features have been
changed
in Dubai. One of the

apparent differences between two pictures is residential area

expansion,
in particular
, the number of buildings has
been increased
.
In addition
, in the past bushes
were planted
around

the street
but
in present, they are all removed and
now
it can

be
seen
the tower in the middle of the square
is surrounded
by

tall pine trees. The most noticeable transition is the increasing

number of cars in the street,
now
the street is full of cars that

make
roundabout crowded.

In comparison
,
many
parts of the roundabout have remained,

in both past Dubai’s
map
and present
map
the structure of

streets around the square is the same,
also
, the tower has

stayed with no alternation.

Overall
the difference between two
maps
is not significant,

there are
only
few minor
changes
during these decades in the

clock tower roundabout.
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