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What humans have been doing on the planet Earth lead to extinction of many animal species.

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There are a number of factors responsible for the extinction of some animal species. Chief among these is that animals' habitats have been reduced significantly over the last decades due to deforestation. This is because farmers in many place keep using an old farming technique which requires forest clearance to make more land to grow their crops. Another reason is that some species can not adapt quickly enough with climate changes. For example, polar bears' hibernation rely on deep glaciers which are melting and reducing in magnitude due to global warming effects.

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