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Children over 15 years should be e allowed to take their own decisions without any guidance of of their parents their parents. Do you agree do you agree or disagree.

Children over 15 years should be e allowed to take their own decisions without any guidance of of their parents their parents. Do you agree Yk9NV
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IELTS academic Children over 15 years should be e allowed to take their own decisions without any guidance of of their parents their parents. Do you agree

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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