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Children over 15 years should be e allowed to take their own decisions without any guidance of of their parents their parents. Do you agree do you agree or disagree.

Children over 15 years should be e allowed to take their own decisions without any guidance of of their parents their parents. Do you agree Yk9NV
In this modern era, the many children without permission the animal. Therefore, youngster decision any work and good decision for the Leicester and the teenager also write commitment. secondly, the teenager h according the work and a younger on his work of the study. Thirdly, the money children of the know any problem of the parents and any work on his time. On the other hand, there are plethora this statement. Therefore, the many children animal without permission of the parents and the children any work of help of the parents not take a decision of children moreover, the parents not allowed any fork for the children and the the parents also decide in a work of the children of parents also thinking be a bad habit of the my children and parents spend the money in a study of the teenager. To conclude, there are various merits and demerits this statement. The teenager also decision of the study and but the parents of the decision of the study in a children.
In this modern era, the
many
children
without permission the animal.
Therefore
, youngster
decision
any
work
and
good
decision
for the Leicester and the
teenager
also
write commitment.
secondly
, the
teenager
h according the
work
and a younger on his
work
of the
study
.
Thirdly
, the money
children
of the know any problem of the
parents
and any
work
on his time.

On the other hand
, there are plethora this statement.
Therefore
, the
many
children
animal without permission of the
parents
and the
children
any
work
of
help
of the
parents
not take a
decision
of
children
moreover
, the
parents
not
allowed
any fork for the
children
and
the the
parents
also
decide in a
work
of the
children
of
parents
also
thinking be a
bad
habit of the my
children
and
parents
spend the money in a
study
of the
teenager
.

To conclude
, there are various merits and demerits this statement. The
teenager
also
decision
of the
study
and
but
the
parents
of the
decision
of the
study
in a
children
.
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IELTS academic Children over 15 years should be e allowed to take their own decisions without any guidance of of their parents their parents. Do you agree

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