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Very happy people (per percent)

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The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of happy people who live in different parts of the world (Nigeria, Mexico, Australia, USA, UK, Japan, Zimbabwe, Russia, Romania). Overall, it can be seen that, more than a half of the public of Nigeria and Mexico have considered themselves to be very delighted, whereas the people of the other countries, less than half, have thought that they are content.
The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of happy
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people
who
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in
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different
parts of the world (Nigeria, Mexico, Australia, USA, UK, Japan, Zimbabwe, Russia, Romania).

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that, more than a half of the public of Nigeria and Mexico have considered themselves to be
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very
delighted, whereas the
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people
of the other countries, less than half, have
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thought
that they are content.

IELTS academic Very happy people (per percent)

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
66 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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