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The chart illustrates various reasons as to why UK residents travelled abroad from the year 1994 to 1998. While the bar chart shows number of people's that travelled to western Europe, north America, and other areas over the same period. Overall, holiday took the biggest chunk among the reasons given by travellers, while on the other hand, western Europe was clearly the most preferred destination. To begin with, holiday was at 15746 people, dropped to 14898 persons in 1995 then it took consistent growth upto 20700 in 1998. Bussinnes had an upward growth throughout, from 3155 poeple in the first year to almost 4000 persons 1998. Visit to family and friends followed closely as third most preferred reason for travelling started at 2689 responses then droped by about 60 responses followed by an upward trend to 3181. Other reasons formed the least among them at averagely 1000 people every year. Western Europe, being the most preferred destination throughout the season, started by almost 20000 people, slightly dropped to about 17000 persons in 1995 then continued with upward trajectory to nearly 25000 people. This was followed by other destination areas constantly remaining at around 2000 people from 1994 to 1998. The least visited place among the sampled travellers was North America. It was at about 1000 persons although with growth which grew to nearly 2000 people in the end year.
The chart illustrates various
reasons
as to why UK residents travelled abroad from the year 1994 to 1998. While the bar chart
shows
number of
people
's that travelled to
western Europe
,
north America
, and
other
areas over the same period.

Overall
, holiday took the biggest chunk among the
reasons
given
by
travellers
, while on the
other
hand,
western Europe
was
clearly
the most preferred destination.

To
begin
with, holiday was at 15746
people
, dropped to 14898
persons
in 1995 then it took consistent growth
upto
20700 in 1998.
Bussinnes
had an upward growth throughout, from 3155
poeple
in the
first
year to almost 4000
persons
1998. Visit to family and friends followed
closely
as third most preferred
reason
for travelling
started
at


2689 responses then
droped
by about 60 responses followed by an upward trend to 3181.
Other
reasons
formed the least among them at
averagely
1000
people
every year.

Western Europe, being the most preferred destination throughout the season,
started
by almost 20000
people
,
slightly
dropped to about 17000
persons
in 1995 then continued with upward trajectory to
nearly
25000
people
. This
was followed
by
other
destination areas
constantly
remaining at around 2000
people
from 1994 to 1998. The least visited place among the sampled
travellers
was North America. It was at about 1000
persons
although with growth which grew to
nearly
2000
people
in the
end
year.
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