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unfair things that happen in competitions

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In my view, there are many unfair things that happen in competitions in many cases. For example, if there is a cooking competition some contestants might bribe the committee to let them win or some might even steal the recipe, and to solve this problem there are many ways such as addressing these problems by enacting laws that preserve the rights of all competing parties, and impose penalties on those who break those laws, and finally, to do a background check on each of the committee, and contestants.

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IELTS academic unfair things that happen in competitions

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

88 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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