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Two maps show past and present Australian park.

Two maps show past and present Australian park. D228W

A fleeting glance two layouts exhibits the changes which have taken place in the Australian park in 2015 and current time. From the overall perception, it is immensely clear that the radical altercations have been occured in the Australian park. Converting into functional park. By adding benches, barbecue and tennis. Among a myriad of modifications one spectacular change has taken place in the western eastern side. Apart from this, in the first map the west south area was covered by some trees.

A fleeting glance two layouts exhibits the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 which have taken place in the Australian park in 2015 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 time.

From the overall
 perception, it is immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the radical altercations have been Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "occurred", the past tense form of the verb 'occur'?occurred
occured
 in the Australian park. Converting into functional park. By adding benches, barbecue and tennis.

Among a myriad of modifications one spectacular This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 has taken place in the western eastern side. Apart from this, in the first
 map the west south area was covered
 by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees. 