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This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features v.2

This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made E0oM

Overall, there are fifteen main steps in manufacturing tomato ketchup, starting with pick tomatoes in field and ending with become consumer goods in the market. At the first step of the process is pick tomatoes from the field and put in the basket. Next they classify tomatoes in groups according to features that they have in quality. After that, its will be sent to factory to start the process of making products. First, they removed stalk, seeds and skin, then boil and crush its until it become liquid. At the following stage, they add sugar, vinegar and salt for a certain amount

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IELTS academic This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

101 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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One main idea per paragraph
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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