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This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features v.2

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Overall, there are fifteen main steps in manufacturing tomato ketchup, starting with pick tomatoes in field and ending with become consumer goods in the market. At the first step of the process is pick tomatoes from the field and put in the basket. Next they classify tomatoes in groups according to features that they have in quality. After that, its will be sent to factory to start the process of making products. First, they removed stalk, seeds and skin, then boil and crush its until it become liquid. At the following stage, they add sugar, vinegar and salt for a certain amount
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until it become liquid. At the following stage, they
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sugar, vinegar and salt for a certain
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IELTS academic This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made

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