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This picture depicts the total time spent on six different chores around the house during the day by men and women in Great Britain.

This picture depicts the total time spent on six different chores around the house during the day by men and women in Great Britain. Jx2w
This picture depicts the total time spent on six different chores around the house during the day by men and women in Great Britain. Overall, men preferred pet care and gardening to spent most of their time over any of the tasks, and they dislike washing more than any other work. But also, women spent most of their time on cooking, baking, and washing in contrast to men. The females have given the least time acting on maintaining add jobs. Notable, women spend 74 minutes per day in cooking which is double the time contributed by men. Additionally, observer women spend 45 minutes of extra time over men in cleaning. Next, in gardening, women tumbled under the men with a difference of 28. 5 hours per day. With care for children and their play, women were far above men by 25 minutes. Besides this point, males undertake maintenance almost three times more than women. On a final note of comparison washing and ironing, women lead men by 12 times the men with 25 minutes in a day.
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spent on six
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chores around the
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during the day by
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and
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in Great Britain.

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,
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preferred pet care and gardening to spent most of their
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over any of the tasks, and they dislike washing more than any other work.

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women
spent most of their
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on cooking, baking, and washing
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. The females have
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acting on maintaining
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Notable,
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spend 74 minutes per day in cooking which is double the
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contributed by
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men
.
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women
spend 45 minutes of extra
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over
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in cleaning.
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, in gardening,
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women
tumbled under the
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men
with a difference of 28. 5 hours per day.

With care for children and their play,
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were far above
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by 25 minutes.
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. On a final note of comparison washing and ironing,
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lead
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men
by 12
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the
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with 25 minutes in a day.
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IELTS academic This picture depicts the total time spent on six different chores around the house during the day by men and women in Great Britain.

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