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This diagram shows how many people have visited a certain island in the Caribbean area from the year 2010 to 2017.

This diagram shows how many people have visited a certain island in the Caribbean area from the year 2010 to 2017. NM2wj
This diagram depicts how many people have visited a certain island in the Caribbean area from the year 2010 to 2017. The information is categorized into three groups which include the visitors who stayed on cruise ships, the ones who stayed on island, and finally the total number of tourists. The general trend of the graph shows an increase in the number of the tourists. It can be inferred from the graph that the number of individuals who chose to remain on cruise ships underwent some fluctuations from 2010 to 2012, but continued to rise after that. Moreover, it can be clearly seen that from 2010 to 2011, the rate referring to the individuals staying on the island has remained stable. Nevertheless, this rate has gone up untill 2013 and from then to around 2015, it has again stayed rather unchanged. The values actively demonstrate that between 2015 and 2017 there has been a mere decrease in that section of the graph. Lastly, the total number is depicted to have risen noticabley from one million to 3. 5 million people. To summarize all the stated points, the mentioned diagram displays how the number of tourists who visited a specific Caribeean island has changed since 2010 untill 2017. It evidently indicates that the total amount has soared while the two sub sections constructing it have experienced some variations.
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have visited a certain
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island
in the Caribbean area from the year 2010 to 2017. The information
is categorized
into three groups which include the visitors
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who
stayed on cruise ships, the ones
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who
stayed on
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island
, and
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the total
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number
of tourists. The general trend of the graph
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shows
an increase in the
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number
of the tourists.

It can
be inferred
from the graph that the
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number
of individuals
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who
chose to remain on cruise ships underwent
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some
fluctuations from 2010 to 2012,
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but
continued to rise after that.

Moreover
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that from 2010 to 2011, the rate referring to the individuals staying on the
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island
has remained stable.
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, this rate has gone up
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untill
2013 and from then to around 2015, it has again stayed
rather
unchanged. The values
actively
demonstrate that between 2015 and 2017 there has been a mere decrease in that section of the graph.

Lastly
, the total
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number
is depicted
to have risen
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noticabley
from one million to 3. 5 million
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people
.

To summarize
all the stated points, the mentioned diagram displays how the
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of tourists
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who
visited a specific
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Caribeean
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island
has
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changed
since 2010
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untill
2017. It
evidently
indicates that the total amount has soared while the two sub sections constructing it have experienced
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some
variations.
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