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This diagram illustrates how a lead pencil is made.

This diagram illustrates how a lead pencil is made. lW3nw

This diagram illustrates how a lead pencil is made. There are twelve stages in this process starts from planting the trees and end in packaging the product. First, some trees are planted on the soil. After four months, those trees are replanted in other areas. Three years later, when those trees are fully grown, they are thinned. After fourteen years when the trees are ready to be produced, they are slats and treated through machines. Then, the treated wood gets glued with black lead sticks. And then a new slat was put on top of it. After that, it was hard-pressed in heat to make the combination stick together. Finally, they cut the slat into pieces, painted, sharpened, and stamped them before packaging them into boxes and sell them over the world.

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trees
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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trees
are planted
 on the soil. After four months, those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
are replanted
 in other areas. Three years later, when those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 are fully
 grown, they are thinned
. After fourteen years when the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 are ready to be produced
, they are slats and treated through machines. Then, the treated wood This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 glued with black lead sticks. And then a new slat was put
 on top of it. After that, it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-pressed in heat to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the combination stick together. Finally
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
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before
 packaging them into boxes and sell them over the world. 