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The line chart shows what percentage of new teachers thought English and French ' s languages in Ontario each year between 2001 and 2007.

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The line chart shows what percentage of new teachers thought English and French ' s languages in Ontario each year between 2001 and 2007. Overall, the percentage of both English and French teachers was approximately the same about 7 percent between 2001 and 2002, however, they had the same trend from 2003 to 2005, the French teachers worked more than English teachers. The proportion of English teacher decreased sharply from 70% to 40% from 2001 to 2005, although they increased from 2003 to 2005, the figure felt considerably in 2005 and reached to 45% in 2007. According to the data the percentage of French teachers went down from 70% to 50% between 2001 to 2002, then followed the downward trend during 3- year and peaked at 75% in 2007.
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s languages in Ontario each year between 2001 and 2007.

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was approximately the same about 7 percent between 2001 and 2002,
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worked more than English teachers.

The proportion of English
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decreased
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from 70% to 40% from 2001 to 2005, although they increased from 2003 to 2005, the figure felt
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in 2005 and reached to 45% in 2007.

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went down from 70% to 50%
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, then followed the downward trend during 3- year and peaked at 75% in 2007.
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