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These diagram shows cement and concrete production process. It is also representing that production process of concreate and cement completely different from each other. Frist diagram shows different components of cement production. For cement production limestone and clay crushed by a crusher and turn these into powder. Then passing different process cement is finally produced. At last cement put into a bag.

These diagram shows cement and concrete production process. It is also representing that production process of concreate and cement completely different from each other. Frist diagram shows different components of cement production. For cement production limestone and clay crushed by a crusher and turn these into powder. Then passing different process cement is finally produced. At last cement put into a bag. YWRB
These diagram shows cement and concrete production process. It is also representing that production process of concreate and cement completely different from each other. Frist diagram shows different components of cement production. For cement production limestone and clay crushed by a crusher and turn these into powder. Then passing different process cement is finally produced. At last cement put into a bag.
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IELTS academic These diagram shows cement and concrete production process. It is also representing that production process of concreate and cement completely different from each other. Frist diagram shows different components of cement production. For cement production limestone and clay crushed by a crusher and turn these into powder. Then passing different process cement is finally produced. At last cement put into a bag.

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