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The use of water for three different purposes in all over the world and consumption of water in two different countries.

The use of water for three different purposes in all over the world and consumption of water in two different countries. yLNdd
The information aboutthe use of water in all over the world as well as utilisation of water in two distinct countries is depicted by rendered trilinear graph and tabular chart. The data has been calibrated in km³, millions and metres³. A cursary glance at the graph reveals that the intake of water for agriculture use was around 500km³ in 1990. Following this, near by 1950 the agricultural water use crossed 1000km³ simultaneously, during 2000 it pegged on the peak point at 3000. Moreover, water consumption for industrial or domestical use was remained identical on negligible figure till 1940, whereas the industrial water intake rose up dramatically with more than 1000 in next four decades as well as minor discrepancy had shown by domestic use of water during 2000. Moving towards on the tabular chart illustrates that 176 million natives live in brazil. However, a small minority of world populace 5. 2 million resile in democratic republic of congo. Also, the irrigated area of brazil is 256 times up from another nation(26, 500km² and 100km²). In addition to this, brazil utilise water around 359m³ and other region use just 8m³ per headAs an overview, it can vividly manifested that the agricultural use of water was too higher from other purposes water consumption. Similarly, the maximum water consumed by brazil per person.
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in all over the world
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utilisation
of
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water
in two distinct countries
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in km³, millions and
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metres³
. A
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cursary
glance at the graph reveals that the intake of
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water
for agriculture
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use
was around
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500km
³ in 1990. Following this,
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near by
1950 the agricultural
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water
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use
crossed
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1000km
³
simultaneously
, during 2000 it pegged on the peak point at 3000.
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,
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water
consumption for industrial or
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domestical
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use
was remained
identical on negligible figure till 1940, whereas the industrial
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intake rose up
dramatically
with more than 1000 in
next
four decades
as well
as minor discrepancy had shown by domestic
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of
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water
during 2000. Moving towards on the tabular chart illustrates that 176 million natives
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live
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brazil
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minority of world populace 5. 2 million
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resile
in democratic republic of
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congo
.
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brazil
is 256 times up from another nation(26,
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500km
² and
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100km
²).
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brazil
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utilise
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around
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359m
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8m
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headAs
an overview, it can
vividly
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manifested
that the agricultural
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was too higher from other purposes
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water
consumption.
Similarly
, the maximum
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consumed by
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brazil
per person.
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